Wednesday, September 4, 2013

This Week's Featured Author: Mark Tedesco



Mark Tedesco
Mark Tedesco is a published author and history teacher in Los Angeles. He was born in California but lived for many years in Europe. There he developed a unique perspective which is apparent in his teaching and writing.
 
Mark's current work is a work of historical fiction on the forth century soldiers John and Paul. Mark enjoys drawing the reader into the historical genre especially of the ancient world. I am John, I am Paul: A Story of Two Soldiers in Ancient Rome is this work which Tedesco considers to be his greatest.

Besides writing, Mark's passions run the gamut from archeology to sports and fitness. His colleagues consider to him to be somewhat of a Renaissance man. He enjoys imparting to his students his thirst for life and happiness. This thirst, or quest, is apparent in every work Mark devotes himself to.

We ask Mark some questions:

If you could travel in a Time Machine would you go back to the past or into the future?

I would travel to the ancient world, to Rome, Greece and Egypt. If I could avoid getting the Plague or dying in battle, I would enjoy the grandeur and drama of ancient civilizations and travel to see the wonders of that world. I would wander the streets of Rome and gaze up at the temples and painted statues and walk through the bazaars of Alexandria while listening to the many languages of visitors and residents. Yes, the ancient world would be where I would time travel.


What inspired you to want to become a writer?

Writing comes as naturally to me as eating a meal. It wells up inside of me and most of what I write is already completed in my head. I do not know how that happens but it manifests itself as the need and desire to write it down. Other times, there is nothing welling up; I cannot force it. It is the waft of inspiration that blows through or remains calm.

Tell us your most rewarding experience since being published.

Since being published, the most rewarding experience is meeting and getting to know people that I would never come across in my daily life. From transgendered persons to Catholic priests, from male to female, gay and straight, from academics to bodybuilders; all these people and more have come across my path in the wake of “I am John, I am Paul: A Story of Two Soldiers in Ancient Rome” being published. This book has made my world larger.


What's one piece of advice you would give aspiring authors?

A true author is an artist and writes out of his/her need to write. It is a passion which is its own reward. Commercial success is icing on the cake, but if it becomes the motivating factor, the creative core becomes stale. Commercial success does not equal greatness and I hope that aspiring authors write something great.

Finish the sentence- one book I wish I had written is....

One book I wish I had written is a historical novel on the daughter of Cleopatra, whose name was Cleopatra Selene. Some years ago I became fascinated with her life. I began doing the research of the time she lived in Alexandria with her mother, her subsequent move to Rome and living in the house of Octavia, Mark Anthony’s wife, and then her marriage and crowning as queen. It was as if Cleopatra’s dream for her son was realized instead in her daughter.

But when I sat down to write the book I realized, though interested in the person’s history, I felt no inspiration. I cannot “force” the writing process. It either unfolds naturally or it doesn’t happen at all. I left this project and, since then, others have taken up the task and several novels have appeared about Cleopatra Selene.

But still, sometimes when I picture her as a child in Alexandria, or as a young woman and object of curiosity in Rome, I think of what an interesting tale I could have woven…

How long do you generally let a story idea ‘marinate’ in your brain before you start the book?

I have no control over how long I let a story “marinate” in my brain before actually writing it. It usually happens one of two ways: either a scene in the book is played out in my head and I simply write it down, or the first lines come to my head and when I start writing the rest flows. If it is a historical novel, this happens towards the end of my research; if it is poetry or prose based on my experience, it happens unexpectedly. It is a process that I have little control over, which would prevent me from working as a writer for a T.V. show or writing on demand. I am fine with that.

Something your readers would never guess about you

Weightlifting is my hobby and I love to lift alone or with friends. The gym is part of my daily routine and I love to set fitness goals or just let off steam by physical exercise. Also, at least twice a week I am asked if I am in the military or am a police officer; I am neither but rumors still spread. A coworker stopped me in the bathroom once to inquire: “I heard you fought in Desert Storm!?” I laughed.

Who or what inspired your last book?

When I was visiting a friend in Rome nearly ten years ago, he told me the story of John and Paul, two soldiers who lived under the reign of Constantine. When he told me the last recorded words that John said to Paul, I wondered about what type of life they lived up to that point that enabled them to have such a bond with one another and a conviction about the meaning of their lives. This started me on a quest to find out more about these two soldiers. After that, the book wrote itself.

What is your favorite scene in the book? Which scene or characters were the most difficult for you to write and why?

My favorite scene in the book is the conversation between Constantina (daughter of Emperor Constantine), John and Paul on their journey to Rome after she is rescued by the two soldiers from a kidnapping attempt. Sitting in front of glowing coals, their conversation grows more intimate as Constantina inquires about the relationship between the two men. She perceives it is one of loyalty and firm commitment but also that it is something more. John attempts to put it into words, comparing it with others who always perceive a space between themselves and the other person, whereas between John and Paul “there is not this space”. When he looks over to Paul for conversation, the tears in his eyes confirm his consensus.

The most difficult scene for me to write was the scene towards the end of the story when Fulvia, the sister of John, is brought some tragic news. Without giving the plot away, the writing of this scene took a toll on my emotionally and tears were rolling down my face as I typed the words.

Describe your book in five words.

Loyalty, honor, love, faith, commitment.


Mark's Book - I am John I am Paul: A Story of Two Soldiers in Ancient Rome


The events surrounding the lives of John and Paul are seen through the eyes of John, a 4th century soldier serving in the Roman Empire under Constantine. He finds himself imprisoned for reasons he does not fully comprehend. He then reflects back on all the events that have led him to this point.
 

Events in the Empire are changing as Constantine tries to consolidate his power. In the struggle Constantina, the daughter of Constantine, is kidnapped by his rival Lucinius.

John and Paul volunteer for the mission of rescuing her and so set out for the north.The harrowing circumstances of her rescue are recounted, and the precarious journey
back to Rome by the two soldiers and the daughter of the Emperor.

Reviews 

"Adventure, intrigue, faith, commitment, love and hate and everything between! Mark Tedesco has done it again, fashioning what is arguably his best work yet! He entices you on a phenomenal journey into the fascinating lives of two 4th century Roman soldiers, John and Paul, in a tale of loyalty and love that grabs you by the throat from the very first sentence and holds you spellbound, gasping for air as you're swept from chapter to chapter with barely a moment to breathe. An unbelievable marriage of fact and fiction that will leave you applauding or appalled but never bored or indifferent. A must read!" -Tony McEwing, Fox News

Monday, September 2, 2013

Tackling Your Book Proposal

Lindsey Rietzsch
BreyAnna writes: 

I am getting ready to write a proposal letter for the book that I am currently writing. I was curious if you had any advice for me (since I am new to this). Thanks for your time!

Proposal letters are not as difficult as they may seem. I mean you only have to fit everything you want someone to know about you and your book onto one page - what's so scary about that, right?

Alright, all sarcasm aside here are a few tips that you need to know to make your proposal letter work for you.

Opening: Address your letter to an actual person rather than Dear ABC Publishing. Rarely you won't be able to find a person to address it to, or the submission guidelines ask you to generally address it to their submissions dept. without giving you any names to work with. In that case listing the company's name is just fine. Avoid a general address such as Dear Agent or Dear Publisher.

One Sentence Book Description: Yes, it should not exceed one sentence. It is simply to state how long your book is and what category it falls in. This is the first thing an agent needs to see in order to direct it to the right person or decide if they want t read any further into your letter. 

One Paragraph Book Description: Remember, you have limited space so choose your words wisely. Introduce your main character and be sure to describe your character as someone worth wanting to know more about. What makes them so intriguing or relateable? Set up the story line and then throw in the curve ball - you know the unforeseen challenges facing your character. Then drop the hook - questions that will leave the reader wanting to  more. Will Amy survive camp Wobblecreek? Will John accept his new life or will he go back to Sherry? Be descriptive in your words. Really, this will be the same paragraph you use on the back of your book as well as on your Amazon description. So, use key words that will help people in searching for a book like yours. 

If your book is non-fiction this is where you will state why your book is needed in the market. What makes it different from the rest that are similar and why it will sell well. You want them to know you have done your research.

One Paragraph Bio: Get to the point! Tell the agent why you are credible as an author, expert in your field, or why you will be a great asset when it comes to marketing your book. Mention degrees, professional experience, and any past works you have already published. Because your space is limited, set up a website or blog where you can have a more detailed bio and portfolio. Provide a link here, encouraging the agent to visit it for more information. Also, paste a small photo of yourself in your bio. I've always believed that putting a face with your bio helps personalize the letter. Plus, if it's a professional photo, it can really help your credibility.

Closing: If the publisher or agent has specified in their guidelines what you should send them (the first 10 pages of your manuscript etc.) here is where you will mention that. State what you have attached for their review and then thank them for their time and consideration. Let them know that you are willing to send them anything more upon their request. 

IMPORTANT!! If you have not completed your manuscript you should not be sending this letter out. Should an agent be interested in what you sent, it is very likely that he/she will request your entire manuscript. If you don't have one to send or it's not finished - you will have irritated your agent and ruined your chance. Even if your agent is kind and encourages you to finish it and send it in. By the time you finish it, the agents excitement about your book will have worn down, possibly even replaced more a more exciting proposal and you may have lost your chance for good. Do it right the first time!

Attachment: Be sure to follow the guidelines. Most agents now days do not want to open attachments and will request that you paste everything into an email. Others will want it in a word document or PDF. Be sure you do what they say and if you state that you have attached something, be sure to attach it. 

Once you have completed your proposal you are ready to send it! Be sure to state in your email title Book Proposal: Your Book Title. Know that it can take 4-10 weeks before you hear back from someone. Some, you will not hear back from at all. When an agent declines your book, don't take it personal. Simply reply with a 'thank you' and do not ask why you were declined. Agents don't have time to critique. One in a blue moon a newer agent will freely provide this information. Use it to your benefit. 

Here are two very different examples I have  used for a couple of my books. The first is a fiction proposal and the second is a non-fiction proposal.

Example #1
 

June 12, 2013

Dear Jamie,

The Realm is the first of a 101,700 word contemporary young adult trilogy series based on true events.

Meet Celeste Day, a beautiful college hopeful who may look like your average girl next door - but in her cozy New England town she’s been harboring a lifelong gift and deep secret that is about to be exposed. Being raised in a family where image is everything, her whole world is about to be turned upside down overnight as Celeste decides to take the summer off to "fix herself". When the good looking and mysterious “Ezra” moves to town things only get more complicated as Celeste is confronted by secrets from her past, unexplained phenomenon and dark paranormal forces beyond her control. Saving her reputation and proving her sanity is the least of her worries when she quickly learns she is a part of something much bigger than she could have ever imagined - something that will forever alter her future and change the world…and there is no turning back!

About the Author

Lindsey K. Rietzsch is the author of the highly acclaimed book How to Date Your Spouse (2008) and Successful Failures (2012). She is also the inventor of Hydroheel (a DRTV skin care product) and a motivational speaker on the topics of relationships and self improvement. Lindsey holds a Bachelor of Integrated studies in Communication, Social Work and Family Studies from Weber State University, is a full time mom and a part time blogger/writer. Visit www.lindseyrietzsch.com for a portfolio and complete bio.

 I have included the first ten pages for your review. The prologue is in first person (it's a pivotal event that ties into the book later), however all 24 chapters are written in third person. If you are interested, I would be happy to send you further chapters or the completed manuscript upon your request.

 I look forward to your reply.

Sincerely, 

Lindsey K. Rietzsch  
www.lindseyrietzsch.com

Example #2 (Non-Fiction)

Back in 2007 this is what I was sending to publishers. Here was my opening email statement and then my attached proposal. It was much longer than what I recommend sending today but it landed me a publishing contract. I think this could easily be shortened and if the agent is interested he/she will request your marketing plan. 



Attn: Rodale Inc.                                                                       Date: April 10, 2007
Title: How to Date Your Spouse: A Couple’s Guide to Falling and Staying in Love 
Genre: Relationship-Marriage/ Self Help/ How To
Word Count: 34,139
Dear Rodale Inc, 

I am seeking representation for my relationship book titled How to Date Your Spouse: A Couple’s Guide to Falling and Staying in Love. I was referred to Rodale Inc. by Health Communications Inc. however I have contacted Rodale Books as I was impressed by your mission to inspire and enable people to improve their lives and the world around them. I have written How to Date Your Spouse as a means to inspire and strengthen marriages throughout the world.  I believe that my manuscript would nicely compliment your line of how-to, self-help, and non-fictional inspiration books. Thank you for this opportunity.

Brief Synopsis
In a society where it’s much easier to fall in love than to stay in love, marriages around the world are aching for solutions to this common dilemma. It’s no wonder that couples everywhere claim to have more fun during their dating years than they do their married years! If dating helped convince the two of you to be together, why can’t it help convince you to stay together?
How to Date Your Spouse offers a clever and humorous approach to the subject of falling and staying in love through the fun and creative art of dating!  To help keep that spark alive a marriage should be like a good book; full of fun, adventure, romance, a little mystery and much humor! How to Date Your Spouse will help you incorporate these elements back into your marriage. Prepare to be enlightened on the why’s and how-to’s of integrating “dating” into your marriage. Not only does this book provide motivation and encouragement, it promotes a new lifestyle that can forever change the course of any marriage. You will be surprised to discover what your marriage has been missing!
The purpose of this book is not to focus on the grim statistics of marriages and relationships, but instead to offer hope and excitement as a way to recharge what couples have already created.  This book contains cites from various credible sources as stated in bibliography.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I have attached a proposal which includes an author bio, summary of market competition, marketing approaches, book overview, outline summary, table of contents, sample chapters, and book references for your review. A completed manuscript is available upon your request.
Lindsey K. Rietzsch

Friday, August 30, 2013

The Four P's You Should Know About


Elsha Fornefeld

All I can say to you is research, research, research! This word is such a powerful tool that if you were a scientist and tried to print a theory on any study without showing where your work or hypothesis came from, your name and work would be shambles. This is also a number one rule in selling your book and even writing it.

Today I’ll give you a little Marketing 101 that any person selling a product or service should know the four P’s of marketing. They are called Product, Price, Placement, and Promotion. If you have all of these covered then you should automatically have some sort of plan using these four words. There is a lot more than just the use of these words such as how, when and where you utilize them.

Product - The product is of course your book. Let’s take a look at the basics. It is finished? Is your book properly edited? Do you have your cover done? If you took the book to a publisher now would he/she be able to put it on the shelf? You need to get the book as polished as possible, because you only have that one chance for someone to get that first impression right about your book.

Pricing - Now let’s look at how your book is priced. Let’s say that you have your book published on Kindle - is it evenly priced? The best way to look at this is to ask yourself if your book is priced at a fair market value. Although that is real estate comparison in a buyer’s market, the best priced home in a neighborhood is usually the first one to sell. So, check your genre and other books like yours that Kindle might be recommending and perhaps make a little bit of a price cut to your book price so you have an edge on competing authors.

Placement -This is such an important area for anything in sales and sadly this where many of my clients seem to fail because they are unwilling to see their product or company from a different perspective. This can be a real challenge for us ­­­­­­as authors because we put a lot of time and ourselves into our writing. This isn’t what the reader cares about. They just care about knowing if it’s a good read that is worth their money?

Where to place your book would start with knowing your demographic. Is it fiction or nonfiction? What other books are similar to yours? The people that liked Twighlight, were all into facebook and they all had the latest android phones rather than iphones. Also over forty five percent of their fan base were women between the ages of 30-55. The people that prefer your writing may surprise you.  Just because it may not be what you like, think about what the average person who likes your style of books may prefer.

Promotion - Demographic places a large part in this. Now that you’ve determined your demographics, you are ready. Consider the people that like your books; where do they live, how much do they read, what do they buy, and how much are they likely to spend on a book? This will determine how you will promote your book.

If you have an older demographic of people it may be worth investing into printing your book. If your generation is anyone younger than 50 and has adapted to Kindle, then publishing in an e-book form is a good idea. Npw, where do you announce your book? Twitter is used more by adults in more of a business sense, however facebook is used a lot more widely by everyone (especially for socializing and spreading the word of a book).

Keep researching for all the information you can get on your subject. Use these steps to help you launch your book. The more knowledge you have on your subject, the more power you have to help launch your book.

Wednesday, August 28, 2013

New Video Trailer for The Realm

Lindsey Rietzsch
It's finally here my friends! Yes, the video trailer for The Realm series. It's under three minutes and a little intense. If you find that this trailer intrigues your interest in the book, please share with your friends and family. You can follow The Realm on facebook (released July 2013)

 


Book Description

The Realm: Secrets Unlocked - Book 1 of the Realm Series Series Description:

Do angels and demons really exist? Between the ever thinning veil of mortality and spirit world the battle of good vs. evil rages on.

Meet Celeste Day, a beautiful college hopeful who may look like your average girl next door - but in her cozy New England town she’s been harboring a lifelong gift and deep secret that is about to be exposed. Being raised in a church going family where image is everything, her whole world is about to be turned upside down overnight as Celeste decides to take the summer off to "fix herself". When the good looking and mysterious “Ezra” moves to town things only get more complicated as Celeste is confronted by secrets from her past, unexplained phenomenon and dark paranormal forces beyond her control. Saving her reputation and proving her sanity is the least of her worries when she quickly learns she is a part of something much bigger than she could have ever imagined - something that will forever alter her future and change the world…and there is no turning back!

Monday, August 26, 2013

Guest Blogger - Bestselling Author Jason Wright

We want to thank Jason for accepting the invitation to be a guest on our blog!


Bestselling author shares theory – and his cellphone number





Several years ago I appeared on Glenn Beck’s television program to discuss my novel,The Wednesday Letters. Much to Beck’s astonishment, I chose to share my cellphone number on air with his audience. I invited them to call and share their memories on the importance of personal, handwritten letters in their lives.

I will never forget Beck leaning forward and looking straight into the camera with that patented, sneaky look in his eyes. “Please call him at two in the morning.” After the interview ended, we said goodbye and he promised me my phone would ring.

He was right.

I received thousands of calls and answered as many as I could over the span of several weeks. Many left voicemail messages and some asked for a return call. It took a while, but I honored every request.
It was a sweet experience.

I heard the most incredible stories from people whose lives had been changed by the art of the handwritten letter. I spoke to widows and widowers who clung to boxes of letters like life preservers to remember their loved ones.

I chatted with teens that cherished letters from mothers and from mothers who wept at the memory of a letter from prodigal sons and daughters.

I got to know a young woman whose best friend was on board Flight 93 on Sept. 11, 2001. A treasure trove of personal letters was the salve that helped her heal.

On these many calls we discussed writing, publishing, the books people were reading and what they liked or didn’t about my books and others in my genre.

Many of those callers became readers, but, more importantly, some of those readers became friends.
At the time, the idea of becoming so accessible was highly controversial. Church friends called me crazy, neighbors wondered if I’d lost a bet and even my own family asked what I was thinking.
But to me, the concept was obvious.

If you ask to see someone in the kitchen, servers will usually accommodate you. You might want to raise a concern or compliment the chef.

When you get your car washed, you might give a shout-out to the dedicated employee who polishes that one last pesky spot before opening your door and sending you on your way.

Perhaps you saw a show at your local high school or community theater. It would be quite natural to congratulate the cast or director and tell them what a fine job they’d done.

When visiting a public restroom you might have noticed a sign on the wall inviting you to report unclean conditions to the management. One popular chain of convenience stores even invites customers to call a member of the executive team to report unsanitary conditions at any of their nationwide locations.

The list never ends. Virtually everywhere consumers spend money offers some line of communication back to management, distributors or creators of those particular goods and services.
Why should it be any different with artists?

I once discussed this topic with a loyal reader who also happens to be a good friend. He was lamenting that another author he enjoys reading has a policy about not responding personally to email received through his website. It’s not evident whether messages sent through his online contact form are even read by him and not an assistant.

It’s a shame that any author or artist of any kind would opt to practice their craft behind a digital wall that prevents them from engaging one-on-one with consumers Have we forgotten whom we work for? I recognize that I owe my entire career to hard-working men and women who spend their treasure on something I’ve created.

I don’t work for myself; I work for my readers. The notion that artists are self-employed is a myth. Shouldn’t I be responsive to the market and offer easy lines of communication? Shouldn’t all artists welcome opinions on what they enjoy or don’t?

Of course.

So, if you’ve got something to say about one of my books or columns, I invite you to email me or pick up the phone and call. I can be reached at jwright@deseretnews.com or 540-328-0111.

I can’t promise I’ll answer every call as life, work and sheer volume may sometimes prevent it. But if you leave me a phone number and ask for a return call, you will get one.

Just don’t call me at 2 a.m.

About Jason

Jason Wright is a New York Times, Wall Street Journal and USA Today bestselling author.

Jason is a weekly columnist for the Deseret News and Northern Virginia Daily and articles by Jason have appeared in over 50 newspapers and magazines across the United States including The Washington Times, The Chicago Tribune, and Forbes. He is the author of The James Miracle (2004); Christmas Jars (2005); The Wednesday Letters (2007); Recovering Charles (2008), Christmas Jars Reunion (2009); Penny’s Christmas Jar Miracle (2009); The Cross Gardener (2010); The Seventeen Second Miracle (2010); The Wedding Letters (2011); and, The 13th Day of Christmas (2012).

Jason is also a popular speaker who speaks on faith, the Christmas Jars movement, the Joy of Service, the lost art of letter writing and many other topics. He has been seen on CNN, FoxNews, C-SPAN, and on local television affiliates around the country.

Jason is from Charlottesville, Virginia, but has also lived in Germany, Illinois, Brazil, Oregon and Utah. In 2007, while researching Virginia’s Shenandoah Valley for his novel The Wednesday Letters, Jason fell so in love with the area that he moved his family westward from northern Virginia to the Valley.

Jason is married to Kodi Erekson Wright. They have two girls and two boys.